tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post7380303090622212345..comments2022-11-13T06:04:58.863-08:00Comments on My Poems: Why!Acidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17331286782859327239noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-65358891887748604712010-11-04T18:20:00.869-07:002010-11-04T18:20:00.869-07:00oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to...oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,<br /><br />the days turned to months<br />now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .<br /><br />I am scared<br /><br />I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .<br /><br />maybe I've loss<br /><br />A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be<br /><br />You<br />Two Fools that kept pushing each other away<br />Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk<br /><br />two fools ,with a smile<br />Let go<br /><br />rest our lives<br />those two fools<br />will always feel those beats of<br />"our hearts "<br /><br />wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard<br />I Love You<br /><br />My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave<br /><br />was no one that was there to Listen<br /><br />Was always there ,to fix me<br /><br />Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth<br /><br />there was many that was there to Judge<br /><br />As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing<br /><br />as must seemed things I done ,was heartless<br /><br />dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew<br /><br />Pray ,<br />You hear my Heart <br />Hear my Prayer <br />washed with tears<br />take me with youHootieBirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06210751870838426103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-22606751872864573902009-11-17T04:33:58.851-08:002009-11-17T04:33:58.851-08:00@aadya: thanks. am glad you like it though i still...@aadya: thanks. am glad you like it though i still may think other wise<br /><br />@passi: aisi poem pehle likhne ke liye inspiration he nahi aayi.<br />BTW<br />go to hell passi.Acidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331286782859327239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-66343346734252694432009-11-11T05:57:44.921-08:002009-11-11T05:57:44.921-08:00@raghav.....u cay say that as many times as u want...@raghav.....u cay say that as many times as u want.....it won't make the poem stupid....accept it its cute...:P :D<br /><br />@puneet....thnks :)prihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17558503463758451387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-40554432251030769622009-11-10T22:05:01.002-08:002009-11-10T22:05:01.002-08:00The first three paragraphs were a bit too romantic...The first three paragraphs were a bit too romantic, I mean it is ok to feel like that. Nice.<br />The next three paragraphs are a shameless acceptance of how much she affects you. I like that, but you could have used a few profound and a bit different sentences to show it. It would look really good then. <br />The next paragraph where you question the easily answered answers is a really nice one :)<br />The last paragraph sums it up, you are gone for this girl man, love is in the atmosphere.<br /><br />@pri - I am baffled by the fact that any girl could fancy raghav and moreover baffled by the fact that raghav can choose any girl. All in all, you people are lucky for each other. You will surely rock. My best wishes to you both.<br /><br />@goyal - mast poem likhi bhai, Aise pehle likh deta to u wouldn't have been single for so long. I won't complain that you fell in love. I am proud of you. Take care.Puneethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166951839849157435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-13491114690207116732009-11-10T09:01:01.882-08:002009-11-10T09:01:01.882-08:00Nice.
Bahut Pyaari poem hai.
Like ekdum cute ...Nice. <br /><br />Bahut Pyaari poem hai. <br /><br /><br />Like ekdum cute si.<br /><br />:)Aadyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15027034472803272657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-39716327527281237892009-11-09T11:47:00.203-08:002009-11-09T11:47:00.203-08:00@pri: i love you too. And the poem was stupid.
@f...@pri: i love you too. And the poem was stupid.<br /><br />@falcon: what could be my other motive? I just wanted you to review my poem and am glad you liked it.Acidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17331286782859327239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-73983071568831109992009-11-08T05:49:49.636-08:002009-11-08T05:49:49.636-08:00it's good.. but was their some other motive be...it's good.. but was their some other motive behind insisting me to read it!falconhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09273184008012524374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8326776707486696414.post-33662066083518278322009-11-05T04:01:55.399-08:002009-11-05T04:01:55.399-08:00i love u too......:D :D
this poem is the cutest t...i love u too......:D :D<br /><br />this poem is the cutest thing in the world......thank you so much for it.....:)prihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17558503463758451387noreply@blogger.com